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Thursday, 23 July 2020

Marshmallow challenge !!!

Hello today I am back at school we did a marshmallow challenge it was fun at last we did it but at first we fail a lot .It is hard  to do it,here is a DLO
I think it will be fun for you guys 
our teacher made us do that
Have you made one before? 
It is fun. 
maybe you could try 

2 comments:

  1. Hello Peter, I'm Amelia!

    I liked the way you have a slide on your blog, very creative.

    This reminds me of when I made my tower, as my team won.

    To improve, you could maybe add some colour or a gif at the end to make it more eye-catching.

    Why did you blog about this topic?

    Cya later Peter, keep it up!

    -Amelia

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  2. Hi Peter
    You have done a great job of your slide, fitting the pictures in an interesting way, ka pai!
    Was it a building challenge with marshmallows? Was it hard not to eat them? Did you enjoy doing it?
    I thought from the title that maybe you were given a marshmallow and you had to try not to eat it for as long as you could. How would you go at that challenge?
    Your writing is improving Peter, well done. Always check have I got capitals and full stops where they should be so my work is easy to understand.
    Ka kite
    Ms Lange

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