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Friday, 21 February 2020

What will you know about me this year

hi I am back I am peter happy new year,the last two week we been swimming in our school.
this is me and other people swimming in our school.here is a photo of us swimming.
photo,this is photo
 

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2 comments:

  1. Kia ora, I'm Zahrah.

    I liked the way you added one photo to show how many people was in your group.

    Did you think about the names of the people that is in your group?

    Next time you could work on putting more information in about what kind of swimming actions that you did.

    Did you get excited to go swimming?
    How was your reaction like when you got to the pool?

    Regards,
    Zahrah!

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    1. yes,zahrah you are in the group too

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